STOLEN!
You thought no one would notice, didn't you? Well, it so happens I visit SFDT and have already seen this movie. The original version is by David Newell-Porter (whose name you left in the credits, dumbass), can be seen here: www[DOT]sfdt[DOT]com[SLASH]flash[SLASH]movies[SLASH]8947[DO
T]html
Everyone, please send an e-mail to wade@newgrounds[DOT]com about this stolen movie. Or just blow the whistle, and show the above URL in the reason. Thank you.
Hey, how about I put MY name into the ending because I submited it. Dumbass
Mediocre
The movie itself wasn't actually too bad, but the fact that you used straight pieces of wood as the characters made it far worse than it should have been. Furthur feeding my hate was that you said you were "pretty damn good for your age." Let me tell you something: Tweens are not at all difficult to make movies with. You didn't even use any motion guides or easing, just straight-up tweens. I've seen people younger than you do better, believe it or not. Learn how to do frame-by-frame, and you'll probably get something good soon. At the very least, you have an excellent sense of dramatic timing. But that, unfortunately, does not make up for your lackluster artisitic talent. And after watching this, I can safely say that my hatred for all-tweened movies burns with the fury of a thousand suns.
if you noticed every explostion and the fire and the gun shooting and them falling to peices when there shot if frame by frame and i havent yet seen any one younger than me who's better
Eh. Not too bad.
The only real thing this movie has going for it is the artwork. It's drawn nicely, but what really detracts from it is how you rush the movie by so quickly, so the viewer nevers gets a chance to absorb all the graphic-y goodness. Also, if there is a point to it, it's ridiculously difficult to follow. You need to slow it down a bit, and maybe put some animated scenes in there. Good job otherwise.
A Flash Masterpiece
It truly is. Sham and you must have worked on collaborative projects many times in the past, because I noticed he mentioned you in the book Macromedia Flash MX 2004 at Your Fingertips. He did an excellent job with the virtual camera, but your perfectly executed plot progression was many times better. I was astonished by your art and animation ability; I couldn't believe what I was seeing, especially for a Flash movie.
It would be a crime if you didn't make more Flash movies. You are truly a god.
THIS is talent.
This was an excellent movie. I am usually not a big fan of sprite movies (and I did read your movie description, so don't chew me out for saying so), but this one I really enjoyed. The lip-synching and voice work was awesome, and the smooth flow kept it interesting, too. Keep up the good work.
Awesome!
It just goes to show you--Even if you can't draw, you can still make awesome Flashes. During the whole thing, I kept thinking "Run, little guy, run!"
Good!
I watched Cyborg 009 too, I was extremely disappointed when they cancelled it. All the characters were drawn impressively accurate compared to their small-screen counterparts, although most seemed to have one different flaw in their design. Very nice work, though.
Only submit finished work to Newgrounds
It was definately Newgrouds-worthy, but I had to blam it because it's unfinished. I look forward to the finished version, though.
Nice!
Excellent work! Very imaginative, but please input a working preloader next time--I almost stopped watching because I thought that was it.
lol, I am sorry about the preloader. I grabbed it from a flash project of my brother's not knowing that the loading bar was black in his. Due to that, the bar didnt show up in mine, having a black background :(... Thanks for sticking through til the end! :)
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